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  • Mechanical engineering at the School of Mines of Douai, I'm very motivated for this position that perfectly meets the vision I have of my future profession.
  • Indeed passionate about the field of production, I have acquired through my last two courses a very extensive experience in production in which I was expected to carry a multitude of extremely varied missions that have allowed me to develop my versatility and my skills in project management.

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    • Mechanical engineering at the School of Mines of Douai, I'm very motivated for this position that perfectly meets the vision I have of my future profession.
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    • Indeed passionate about the field of production, I have acquired through my last two courses a very extensive experience in production in which I was expected to carry a multitude of extremely varied missions that have allowed me to develop my versatility and my skills in project management.
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