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  • In my opinion is good to have sports television programmes because it could be a way to encourage people to practice them.
  • However I think we could talk about arguments for and against this subject Firstly as we say before if we show sports, specially to young people, we are encouraging the sport practice and that is the best way to keep your mind free and your body fit On the other hand, the problem we face when we think about sports which are on television is that the only sport that we see on Spanish television is football.
  • Every weekend we have football to see.
  • Too much football I would say, and I think that sometimes it is an agressive sport.
  • In conclusion I am in favour of seeing sports on television but a variety of sports not just football that is what is happening currently in Spain.

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    • In my opinion is good to have sports television programmes because it could be a way to encourage people to practice them.
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    • However I think we could talk about arguments for and against this subject Firstly as we say before if we show sports, specially to young people, we are encouraging the sport practice and that is the best way to keep your mind free and your body fit On the other hand, the problem we face when we think about sports which are on television is that the only sport that we see on Spanish television is football.
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    • In conclusion I am in favour of seeing sports on television but a variety of sports not just football that is what is happening currently in Spain.
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