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Write my idol and want to find the new friends
Thanks you!
My photos has been accepted.
I want to say a wish for her.
I hope she has a birthday happy and romantic .
I impressed your film.
This is " Mara and Clara".
She is my great mother.
p/s: I want to talk about English.
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- Write my idol and want to find the new friends
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- Thanks you!
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- My photos has been accepted.
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- I want to say a wish for her.
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- I hope she has a birthday happy and romantic .
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- I impressed your film.
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- This is " Mara and Clara".
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- She is my great mother.
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- p/s: I want to talk about English.
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- If you want, you add my skype : gianglinh2112 or my facebook : https://www.facebook.com/gianglinh.fbf Tks
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