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I am new here
Hey Dears, My Name is Maxi and I am 18 years old.
I am here to improve my English.
At School, I am very bad at English, so I want to learn more, to pass my A - Level.
What are you doing at Silvester ?
We are going to fly to Egypt.
I am looking fprward to because it will be the first trip with my boyfriend.
We are together since the 1st April and we are very happy together.
Do you have any plans ?

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- Hey Dears, My Name is Maxi and I am 18 years old.
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- I am here to improve my English.
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- At School, I am very bad at English, so I want to learn more, to pass my A - Level.
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- What are you doing at Silvester ?
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- We are going to fly to Egypt.
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- I am looking fprward to because it will be the first trip with my boyfriend.
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- We are together since the 1st April and we are very happy together.
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- Do you have any plans ?
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