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  • November 20th

  • Today is Wednesday, November 20th.
  • In the morning, always, I wake up at 5 o'clock, this morning, when I woke up I scared because I saw a spider.
  • When I wake I say to myself: "today will be a great day." Usually I have a fast breakfast, juice, break, a cup of chocolat, and run to the school.
  • The school usually is very boring, sometimes don't thus, but, often my princess and me, run to the mall and having fun over the dancefloor and see the moon and I feel so quite.
  • Today we chat over the rest, and while we chat, a man called me, after in the evening, he said to us: "can you decore the reception for this Christmas" and I fell so amazing, because last year, we did the great job, we did the decoration for the candles day, so glad, now I must end the school year and learn English, French and create my company, but I don't know what will be the name, I was thinking some names but are very childish.
  • Later, I'm going to investigate how buy on internet?, I want some things but in Colombian dont sell :C

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    • When I wake I say to myself: "today will be a great day." Usually I have a fast breakfast, juice, break, a cup of chocolat, and run to the school.
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    • The school usually is very boring, sometimes don't thus, but, often my princess and me, run to the mall and having fun over the dancefloor and see the moon and I feel so quite.
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    • Today we chat over the rest, and while we chat, a man called me, after in the evening, he said to us: "can you decore the reception for this Christmas" and I fell so amazing, because last year, we did the great job, we did the decoration for the candles day, so glad, now I must end the school year and learn English, French and create my company, but I don't know what will be the name, I was thinking some names but are very childish.
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