Korekty

Text from Sylvain_30 - English

  • Lettre de motivation

  • I am eagerly applying for the position of assistant in your international Finance Team.
  • I heard your company just signed a new joint venture in China which has been mentioned in the job advertisement.
  • I believe that my educational background and work experience would make me an ideal candidate for this position.
  • I am currently in Master's degree in banking and international business at Marseille University.
  • As my resume reflects, I have my bachelor degree in Management and economics which has given me a strong foundation in most of the current management principles.
  • During the three last years, I have learned about accounting, management and marketing skills and I am an experienced user of several accounting software programs.
  • The last four months of the bachelor, I did an accounting and audit internship for the Registered Public Accounting Firm(Tian Hua) in China, which gave me a good foundation in organisation and accounting.
  • I not only have learned to practice the theoretical knowledge of accounting: book keeping and declare dutiable goods, but I also got a new practical skills on audit: prepare detailed reports on audit findings. YES!
  • I believe I am suitable for the position because my enthusiasm and commitment would be hugely valuable to your organisation.
  • When I was a member of my STEP team in the university, I was the team leading.
  • Being rigorous and adaptable to the environment, I can work under pressure.
  • In the last work experience, I just spend a afternoon to redresser a company’s financial report, because the company needs it the next day.
  • So I know how to work more effectively especially under the pressure.
  • Besides, my mother tongue is Chinese, I am aware of the communication skills and that will help you to develop the Asian markets ,particularly in China.
  • For exemple, once I negotiated the sale price of the parts of computer when I worked in company KAI PU .
  • I would be greatly honored to have the chance to further discuss this position with you.
  • The attached resume provides additional information as to my qualifications and contact information.
  • Thank you for your time and consideration.
  • I look forward to hearing from you .

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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    • As my resume reflects, I have my bachelor degree in Management and economics which has given me a strong foundation in most of the current management principles.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • During the three last years, I have learned about accounting, management and marketing skills and I am an experienced user of several accounting software programs.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
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    • The last four months of the bachelor, I did an accounting and audit internship for the Registered Public Accounting Firm(Tian Hua) in China, which gave me a good foundation in organisation and accounting.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • I not only have learned to practice the theoretical knowledge of accounting: book keeping and declare dutiable goods, but I also got a new practical skills on audit: prepare detailed reports on audit findings. YES!
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
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    • I believe I am suitable for the position because my enthusiasm and commitment would be hugely valuable to your organisation.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
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    • In the last work experience, I just spend a afternoon to redresser a company’s financial report, because the company needs it the next day.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12
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    • Besides, my mother tongue is Chinese, I am aware of the communication skills and that will help you to develop the Asian markets ,particularly in China.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14
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