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Help me please :)
Hello It Would be possible to have a dialogue with you to improve my English?
You could correct me and help me to express myself better.
If you agree, say it I, it would be great! Goodbye

lLaurineNovember 2012赶紧投票吧！
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- Help me please :)
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello It Would be possible to have a dialogue with you to improve my English?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- You could correct me and help me to express myself better.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- If you agree, say it I, it would be great! Goodbye
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3