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Text from vaness182 - English

  • November 22th.

  • Today is Friday, November 22th.
  • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products.
  • I love my mommy because, since the divorce, she do to all things for have her daugther happy.
  • The next year I'm going to study to another city, my girlfriend are going to study with me but in six months.
  • Just realized I have a great family, now, somebody here knocking at home door, but my mommy gave me some threads and I must take and bring to the last floor, but are much and I can't take anymore, and I must do two walks.
  • I don't like when the mommy's cellphone rings, 'cause it rings so high and I scare.
  • In that moment,my cellphone are ringing, always, I leave sound because I love the song that sound when my cellphone ring.
  • I love the electronic music, and the classical music, I feel so relaxing, or go in the car with the windon down and feel the breeze and remember all moments in my live.
  • I feel so scared for the next year, not for go to live alone, not, I feel so scared for the changes, go to the U, and left the school.
  • Now, shower time and I must order my things for tomorrow and have a great day, and finish the bracelets and do the cards and give it for my specials peoples in my live.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Vakya 2
    • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2
  • Vakya 3
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  • Vakya 5
    • Just realized I have a great family, now, somebody here knocking at home door, but my mommy gave me some threads and I must take and bring to the last floor, but are much and I can't take anymore, and I must do two walks.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
  • Vakya 6
  • Vakya 7
    • In that moment,my cellphone are ringing, always, I leave sound because I love the song that sound when my cellphone ring.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7
  • Vakya 8
    • I love the electronic music, and the classical music, I feel so relaxing, or go in the car with the windon down and feel the breeze and remember all moments in my live.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 8
  • Vakya 9
    • I feel so scared for the next year, not for go to live alone, not, I feel so scared for the changes, go to the U, and left the school.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9
  • Vakya 10
    • Now, shower time and I must order my things for tomorrow and have a great day, and finish the bracelets and do the cards and give it for my specials peoples in my live.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 10