從wen1980來的文本 - English

  • my car accident

  • ago, three months, i had a car accident. often, the question that people ask me: how didn't you see the truck? i didn't see.
  • here is the story: it was 1 P.M and I had an appointment for my ears in a hospital in brussels. i recorded my GPS in my home but it didn't find the address.
  • I took the road anyway when my GPS found the street in hospital.
  • i think now, that i saw my GPS during too time. suddenly, i saw in front me and boum. i didn't have time to think about death, just i will have an accident! i closed my eyes and when i opened it, i was stop and was alone.
  • then, a man came beside me and he was standing with me. he was speak with me and he was help me. i was stand 1 week in the hospital in charleroi. when i was return in my home, i searched this man for thank him. but i didn't find.
  • 1 week too late, the traffic police came in my home for my statement and i asked him if he had the phone number this man. but the police man didn't know it! but he had a phone number the person who called the police, the day of my accident. i was sad thatit didn't him! i was call to say thank you for when i surprised, this was him. his name is Frederic, during this call, i was crying when i told him thank you. i was, i'm really happy talked to him and thank him.
  • i hope again to see him a day!

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    • here is the story: it was 1 P.M and I had an appointment for my ears in a hospital in brussels. i recorded my GPS in my home but it didn't find the address.
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    • i think now, that i saw my GPS during too time. suddenly, i saw in front me and boum. i didn't have time to think about death, just i will have an accident! i closed my eyes and when i opened it, i was stop and was alone.
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    • then, a man came beside me and he was standing with me. he was speak with me and he was help me. i was stand 1 week in the hospital in charleroi. when i was return in my home, i searched this man for thank him. but i didn't find.
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    • 1 week too late, the traffic police came in my home for my statement and i asked him if he had the phone number this man. but the police man didn't know it! but he had a phone number the person who called the police, the day of my accident. i was sad thatit didn't him! i was call to say thank you for when i surprised, this was him. his name is Frederic, during this call, i was crying when i told him thank you. i was, i'm really happy talked to him and thank him.
      赶紧投票吧!
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