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  • November 25th.

  • Today is Monday, November 25th.
  • The weather is cold, so cold, then I'm wearing jacket, sweater, socks, I feel so frozen.
  • Then I'm going to do the homeworks and go to my bed and do others homeworks and see the tv and drink tea.
  • Tomorrow I'm going to clean the tree and after decorate it.
  • Tonight, a friend is going to teachs me do the stuffed animals, the last years I decorated my tree with stars, balls, bows, and this year I want some stuffed animals.
  • This morning I'm going late to school, and I should take a cab, and I arrived late.
  • How forget the last year ma copine had the bows all over her, always she acts like a crazy but she is very very centered.
  • I remember when we and ours friends out to school and when to ringing bells house and run run fast, in spanish we called: "tin tin corre corre" which means: "tin tin run run".
  • My kitten is smaller but my other cat is the smallest, it's so cute and playfull, I love my room, because, the sister room is the biggest, the mother room is bigger, my room is big and hot not like my old room.
  • I love go to my room and feel the music on my ears, and read or see the notebook, or like now see the video and understand how do a snowman with vessels.

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    • Tonight, a friend is going to teachs me do the stuffed animals, the last years I decorated my tree with stars, balls, bows, and this year I want some stuffed animals.
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    • How forget the last year ma copine had the bows all over her, always she acts like a crazy but she is very very centered.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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    • I remember when we and ours friends out to school and when to ringing bells house and run run fast, in spanish we called: "tin tin corre corre" which means: "tin tin run run".
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
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    • My kitten is smaller but my other cat is the smallest, it's so cute and playfull, I love my room, because, the sister room is the biggest, the mother room is bigger, my room is big and hot not like my old room.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
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    • I love go to my room and feel the music on my ears, and read or see the notebook, or like now see the video and understand how do a snowman with vessels.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10