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Can Machines Heal Itself?
In all living creatures, if any creatures are hurt, they have ability to heal, but in machines are different.
When machine is broken, we replace a broke piece with a new one.
I read in a scientific news Website that the scientists developed a new way to make a battery heal itself.
They coated the electrodes by polymer.
This method gave the electrodes ability to fix its cracks happened in charge and discharge process.
This development will increase the lifetime of batteries.

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- Can Machines Heal Itself?
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- In all living creatures, if any creatures are hurt, they have ability to heal, but in machines are different.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
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- When machine is broken, we replace a broke piece with a new one.
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- I read in a scientific news Website that the scientists developed a new way to make a battery heal itself.
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- They coated the electrodes by polymer.
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문장 5
- This method gave the electrodes ability to fix its cracks happened in charge and discharge process.
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- This development will increase the lifetime of batteries.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6