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  • In the top of the cover page there are information’s about the newspaper: The date, the price, the big tittle, the internet site, the print run, the Headline: a photo shock accompanied by a bold title “Assad accused as hundreds die in gas attack on rebels” The coverage it is synthetic and attractive to promote the act of purchase and the desire to read and provides information on the content of the newspaper.
  • There are not many images, and you can even already some advertising.
  • Advertising takes an important place in the newspaper, each page can be one or more advertisements even more, and someone stand on two pages.
  • I think the ads help lower the price of paper and make it reachable to middle class.
  • Here the advertising is directly loggers by the newspaper; they are the “guardian offers”.
  • The one we chose is a journey; you can see the offer on the website loggers, or get information and book by phone.

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    • In the top of the cover page there are information’s about the newspaper: The date, the price, the big tittle, the internet site, the print run, the Headline: a photo shock accompanied by a bold title “Assad accused as hundreds die in gas attack on rebels” The coverage it is synthetic and attractive to promote the act of purchase and the desire to read and provides information on the content of the newspaper.
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    • Advertising takes an important place in the newspaper, each page can be one or more advertisements even more, and someone stand on two pages.
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    • The one we chose is a journey; you can see the offer on the website loggers, or get information and book by phone.
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