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  • Pie Charts

  • The 3 pie charts compare expenditures of one school in the UK in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
  • As it can be seen from the pie charts, the expenditures on insurance were increasing gradually from 2% in 1981 to 8 % by 2001 year.
  • Teachers` salaries have not been changed enormously and remained at 40-50 % of the school spending.
  • The expenses on furniture and equipment were constantly fluctuating with a sharp drop (from 15 % in 1981 to 5 % in 1991) and a significant rise to 23 % in 2001.
  • The resources (e.g. books) was a large part of school`s expenditures in 1981 and 1991(15 % and 20 % respectively), however this point of spending decreased considerably by 2001 year (9 %).
  • The salaries of other workers were reducing gradually from 28 % to 15 % in 2001.
  • Overall, the expenditures on the insurance, furniture and equipment in the school rose on account of the decrease of spending on resources and other workers` salaries.

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    • As it can be seen from the pie charts, the expenditures on insurance were increasing gradually from 2% in 1981 to 8 % by 2001 year.
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    • The expenses on furniture and equipment were constantly fluctuating with a sharp drop (from 15 % in 1981 to 5 % in 1991) and a significant rise to 23 % in 2001.
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    • The resources (e.g. books) was a large part of school`s expenditures in 1981 and 1991(15 % and 20 % respectively), however this point of spending decreased considerably by 2001 year (9 %).
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    • Overall, the expenditures on the insurance, furniture and equipment in the school rose on account of the decrease of spending on resources and other workers` salaries.
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