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For everybody who like to travel)
Hi!
My name is Ira!
I am from Ukraine.
I am photographer.
I like to travel very much.
And now I have such opportunity.
In October I and my husband had been in Netherland, France and Poland.
And I learn English to speak abroad easily.
Please help me !)) And please recommend me a country is liked for you!

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- Hi!
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- My name is Ira!
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- I am from Ukraine.
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- I am photographer.
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- I like to travel very much.
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- And now I have such opportunity.
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- In October I and my husband had been in Netherland, France and Poland.
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- And I learn English to speak abroad easily.
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- Please help me !)) And please recommend me a country is liked for you!
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