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Humans invite new products and equipment every day which play a vital role in facilitating our daily life.

Every product undergoes different chains of complicated procedures and the main component is used to complete them is the “petrol” which cause environment pollution when it convert to vibration that exhale from cars and chimneys’ factories.

This vibration contains carbon, neutron and other poison elements.

Some people believe that the significant solution of environment pollution is increasing the price of the petrol but I think this solution will affect negatively on poor people only, but wealthy people can offer the price and consume the same amount of petrol for their factories and cars, furthermore , they will increase the price of their product as a result of increasing the petrol price ,the poor people will be compelled to accept buying their needs with the high price although they face difficulties to offer it.

And I believe the best solution is to find the alternative source of energy such as electric, hydropower and solar energy and encourage nations to use them by legislating a new law to decrease the insurance on products that use these types of energy or to allow to people who use them to receive a government subsidy and I insist that the best way to solve the growing traffic is to extend the streets.

I have been to the capital city of Qatar “Dawha” last week and I noticed that this busy city never suffers of traffic jam because of its wide streets pavement.