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An English Boy
Its all about an boy who wants to learn US accent.
He tried a lot to learn but he could not succeed. Why???

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- An English Boy
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句子 1
- Its all about an boy who wants to learn US accent.
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句子 2
- He tried a lot to learn but he could not succeed. Why???
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