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  • The line graph illustrates the amount of cargo carried from 1974 till 2002 in the UK.
  • As it can be seen from the graph, goods were transported by 4 different ways of transportation: by road, water, rail and pipeline.
  • The transportation by the road was the most widespread mode of carry cargo.
  • Although it was gradually increasing (from 70 million tonnes to 98million tonnes) during the past 3 decades, there were 2 drops in amount of transported goods in 1982 and 1995.
  • The quantities of goods transported by water rose sharply from 40 million tonnes in 1978 to 55 million tonnes in 1981.
  • From 1981 it was remaining constant with a fall in 1998 (to 51 million tonnes) and a sharp increase to 68 million tonnes by 2002.
  • The quantity of cargo carried by rail constantly fluctuated from 40 million tonnes in 1974 to 30 million tonnes in 1985 and 1995.
  • However, the rate of this mode increased by 2002 reaching over 40 million tonnes a year.
  • Contrary, the carry cargo by pipeline was gradually rising during this period (from 5 million tonnes in 1974 to 21 million tonnes in 2002).
  • However, this mode of transport still remained the less popular kind of goods` transportation.
  • To sum up, the quantities of goods transported by road, water, rail and pipeline slightly rose by 2002.
  • The carry cargo by road reached 98 million tonnes by 2002 which is over 4 times higher than the transportation by pipeline.

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    • As it can be seen from the graph, goods were transported by 4 different ways of transportation: by road, water, rail and pipeline.
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    • Although it was gradually increasing (from 70 million tonnes to 98million tonnes) during the past 3 decades, there were 2 drops in amount of transported goods in 1982 and 1995.
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    • The quantities of goods transported by water rose sharply from 40 million tonnes in 1978 to 55 million tonnes in 1981.
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    • From 1981 it was remaining constant with a fall in 1998 (to 51 million tonnes) and a sharp increase to 68 million tonnes by 2002.
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    • The quantity of cargo carried by rail constantly fluctuated from 40 million tonnes in 1974 to 30 million tonnes in 1985 and 1995.
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    • Contrary, the carry cargo by pipeline was gradually rising during this period (from 5 million tonnes in 1974 to 21 million tonnes in 2002).
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    • The carry cargo by road reached 98 million tonnes by 2002 which is over 4 times higher than the transportation by pipeline.
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