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  • Tourism (school essay)

  • Nowadays tourism is very popular.
  • Some think that the tourism is a good way to have relax, while the others consider it to be environment destroying.
  • In my opinion the tourism is not just a travel for recreational, leisure or business purposes; it is also a great opportunity to discover the world.
  • Discovering means the familiarity with the environment in other countries, studying history and, of course, meeting new people.
  • Therefore, people can organize inter-ethnic society.
  • Small multicultural groups all over the world are the good beginning for making people unity.
  • What is more, there are a lot of poor countries in Asia and Africa.
  • Consequently, developing the tourist business is the only one method they can use to receive income from outside.
  • However, some laymen think that the tourism contributes developing of serious problems such us disrespectful attitude to cultural monuments.
  • Moreover, they are against flights over their cities, because it causes air pollution.
  • Actually, there’s a widely held view that tourists are interested in exploring other countries, so they do not even think to destroy anything.
  • As for the air pollution, planes do not deteriorate ecology as much as many factories around the world do.
  • In conclusion, I would like to say that the tourism is promising and perspective trend, which we should improve to provide comfortable communication between people all over the Earth.

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