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I am angelic.
Hello, everybody.
I would like to talk to strangers people (and maybe some people in my country), my name is Jessie and I'm 17.
Don't be afraid, I promise I won't bite you! Interested?
Leave a message!

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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

标题
- I am angelic.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello, everybody.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I would like to talk to strangers people (and maybe some people in my country), my name is Jessie and I'm 17.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Don't be afraid, I promise I won't bite you! Interested?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Leave a message!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4