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Nirvana n°1
I would like to speak to Nirvana.
Nirvana was a rock band very famous, it was founded in 1987.
In the late 1980s Nirvana has find the successe with "Smells Like Teen Spirit", the first single 1991.
Kurt Cobain was the singer of this group.
April 8, 1994, Cobain was found dead of a self-inflicted shotgun wound to the head at his Seattle home because, he has got many problems with the drogue, the love and may be money.
Then this tragedie, many girls and boys were comited suicided too because they would like to be with theirs idols.
This problem was touched all the United States, and even now, we remember him.
Thinks for the correction !

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- Nirvana n°1
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משפט 1
- I would like to speak to Nirvana.
  Vote now!
- הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 1
משפט 2
- Nirvana was a rock band very famous, it was founded in 1987.
  Vote now!
- הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 2
משפט 3
- In the late 1980s Nirvana has find the successe with "Smells Like Teen Spirit", the first single 1991.
  Vote now!
- הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 3
משפט 4
- Kurt Cobain was the singer of this group.
  Vote now!
- הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 4
משפט 5
- April 8, 1994, Cobain was found dead of a self-inflicted shotgun wound to the head at his Seattle home because, he has got many problems with the drogue, the love and may be money.
  Vote now!
- הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 5
משפט 6
- Then this tragedie, many girls and boys were comited suicided too because they would like to be with theirs idols.
  Vote now!
- הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 6
משפט 7
- This problem was touched all the United States, and even now, we remember him.
  Vote now!
- הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 7
משפט 8
- Thinks for the correction !
  Vote now!
- הוסף תיקון חדש! - משפט 8