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She was the most beautiful girl I’ve never seen, she had the most cutest face on earth, was a porcelain doll sculpted taking care of every single detail.

She has a beautiful long black hair which made her seem the portrait of a virgin.

This girl had on her little hands a chain which was very curious for me.

She spent the whole class seeing it.

Everybody in the school was wondering about the chain as she didn't talk to much and she was always get lost seeing her chain.

I didn't understand what was so special in that pretty accesory, but I really wanted to know it.

I was sat behind she.

It was my third English class day in that group, but I had been seeing that mysterious girl for long time ago.

I knew only her last name.

Never would I have imagined that this day the fortune would put her in my way.

When the classes finished I went back home.

I opened the door and she was there, again the girl of my English class, the one with the chain.

-Hello, Thomas- told me Mary, my little sister who was in the living room with the girl -Hello, Mary and… -Caroline is my name-.

My god, finally I got her name.

She was Caroline, my sweet Caroline whose slight voice perforate still my mind.

-She is my new teacher.- said Mary -Oh, that interesting, I didn't expect to find you here -Nor I- said me Caroline She began to visit my sister all Mondays and friday to help her to reinforce the lessons from school and I was waiting for her too.

I just was waiting her fixed in front of the window.

Many weeks spent, and every time she arrive we talk more and more. whatever comment I made was a clever excuse to know her.

I was happy, and I knew that Caroline would start to love me as I loved her but each time I made her smile she was seeing her chain and suddenly she was quiet, I was feeling she was trying to tell me something but she cannot.

So, I just stay quiet while my heart was wanting to cry what I was feeling.

One day, I arrived to school and wanted to say her how much I loved her, I was ready for take the risk; but something rare happened that day, she ignored me all the morning.

The next day Caroline didn't arrive.

I called her but she didn't answer her phone I was desperate and I was going crazy.

What was happened?

What did I make her?

That afternoon I asked my sister for her and she said me: -bro, she went to USA today -What?

She went where?- I am sorry- and gave me a paper- it's a note for you- I opened the note and read: I love you so much.

I am sick and I need to go to another country for help.

My chain was of my mother who died last year.

She had cancer and I...Me too my Thomas.

I am afraid I going to die too.

Thank for your tenderness, You made my life better.

I have to admit that you like me, I will always love your smile.

That is why, now I don't want to die.

I going to fight for you.

That sad and cold day of November I didn't say goodbye Caroline, from that day I...

I don’t know what about me yet.

I am just waiting for another note.