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My first postcast
Hello !
It's my first time to write in this site.
I would like to learn English to my future job!
Someone to help me please?
Sorry about my english! Bye

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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

标题
- My first postcast
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello !
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- It's my first time to write in this site.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I would like to learn English to my future job!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Someone to help me please?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- Sorry about my english! Bye
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5