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My first text. Thanks polyglotclub!
I have just subscribe in this site and it's the first thing I'm doing here.
I have already been in the US once and enjoyed the country.
I intend to come back some day, I would like to sky and go to Hawaii.
Congratilation to the americans for the wonderful coutry and the education of the people.

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- My first text. Thanks polyglotclub!
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문장 1
- I have just subscribe in this site and it's the first thing I'm doing here.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I have already been in the US once and enjoyed the country.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I intend to come back some day, I would like to sky and go to Hawaii.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Congratilation to the americans for the wonderful coutry and the education of the people.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4