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A short presentation
Hello.
I'm at first on this site, but I think, that it will be very useful for me to be here.
I want to find a new freands from my or others countries and to learn English better.
If you want, I can help you with russian language.
)) I'm from Belarus (Minsk).
My profession is a make-up artist and I also study in the university on economist.
And I ned an answer, what the language is easy to learn against English or is similar for this. Thank you. )))

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- Hello.
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- I'm at first on this site, but I think, that it will be very useful for me to be here.
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- I want to find a new freands from my or others countries and to learn English better.
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- If you want, I can help you with russian language.
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- )) I'm from Belarus (Minsk).
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- My profession is a make-up artist and I also study in the university on economist.
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- And I ned an answer, what the language is easy to learn against English or is similar for this. Thank you. )))
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