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Text from vaness182 - English

  • December 16th.

  • Today is Monday, December 16th.
  • Today my neighbor gave me a present, for christmas, I couldn't stand without open it, then I saw it, and after I closed again, he said, only open in Christmas Eve, He doesn't know that my family give the presents in Epiphany (Three Kings Day ).
  • Noon, this time the lunch was, meat and salade, I don't like much the meat, because I feel so full, and I don't like that feeling.
  • Today I must went to school, I lost religion class, I don't like that class, always, I was roaming around school, as was a first class of the day, never I went, everytime I go with a friends to stay in the grass or play soccer or do something.
  • Yesterday, it was the soccer final tournament, although it was in two cities diferent (Cali, Medellin, and I live in Bogota) I saw people with painting faces and they filled the places and parks while they were watching the match.
  • Yesterday, we finished the decoration of the restaurant, we've invited much people to see the decoration, a lot people went with her families, and the restaurant was full, we couldn't leave enter more people, for security, a lot people gave us the congratulations for it, I feel so happy.
  • Yesterday I'm dreaming that I stayed in the park like the lovers undercover the street, and I off to sleep, while ma copine says to me a poem, but I feel so real the dream that I can't sleep good,I feel so tired, and the evening I grabbed a big fluffy blanket and went to sleep.
  • I fell in love of a girl that is erotic model, u.u :C.
  • I don't know that is good or bad.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Title
  • Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
    • Today my neighbor gave me a present, for christmas, I couldn't stand without open it, then I saw it, and after I closed again, he said, only open in Christmas Eve, He doesn't know that my family give the presents in Epiphany (Three Kings Day ).
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • Noon, this time the lunch was, meat and salade, I don't like much the meat, because I feel so full, and I don't like that feeling.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
    • Today I must went to school, I lost religion class, I don't like that class, always, I was roaming around school, as was a first class of the day, never I went, everytime I go with a friends to stay in the grass or play soccer or do something.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • Yesterday, it was the soccer final tournament, although it was in two cities diferent (Cali, Medellin, and I live in Bogota) I saw people with painting faces and they filled the places and parks while they were watching the match.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • Yesterday, we finished the decoration of the restaurant, we've invited much people to see the decoration, a lot people went with her families, and the restaurant was full, we couldn't leave enter more people, for security, a lot people gave us the congratulations for it, I feel so happy.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • Yesterday I'm dreaming that I stayed in the park like the lovers undercover the street, and I off to sleep, while ma copine says to me a poem, but I feel so real the dream that I can't sleep good,I feel so tired, and the evening I grabbed a big fluffy blanket and went to sleep.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
  • Sentence 9