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Hello!
Well, this is my first time writting here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my english.
I hope, I can find good friends here!

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- Hello!
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句子 1
- Well, this is my first time writting here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my english.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I hope, I can find good friends here!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2