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  • December 23th.

  • Today is Monday, December 23th.
  • Today the weather was very very cold, raining almost day, and now only is very cold.
  • Today I left the house in the morning, and I feel so sad and angry with myself, because, a friend sent me a card and I can't pick up it, but I promess to send a card and a bracelet and a kisses for ser a good friend :].
  • I must work in the restaurant 24th, 25th and 26th but I will be able to talk with her, but she knows that I give my better wishes, and merry christmas and I duty a one present.
  • Yesterday, when I began my day, I beat the bed accidently in my little finger, I don't cried.
  • While I was watching the match, I bend the clothes and I noticed to my favorite jean has a new broken.
  • I bet with the guys that the Liverpool fc win but I couldn't thought that win with six goal to difference.

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  • câu 1
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  • câu 3
    • Today I left the house in the morning, and I feel so sad and angry with myself, because, a friend sent me a card and I can't pick up it, but I promess to send a card and a bracelet and a kisses for ser a good friend :].
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • I must work in the restaurant 24th, 25th and 26th but I will be able to talk with her, but she knows that I give my better wishes, and merry christmas and I duty a one present.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • While I was watching the match, I bend the clothes and I noticed to my favorite jean has a new broken.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • I bet with the guys that the Liverpool fc win but I couldn't thought that win with six goal to difference.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7