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My goal
Hi everyone!
I set a goal - I should know English very well!
For me this goal is not so easy.
I should have a lot of patience and giblet.
So today I watched "House M.D." 's series with English captions.
If I heard unknown words, I made a notes for studying.
This way for studying language is very interesting, I should say.
Also I listen to music in English and try to translate the songs.
I hope that I will get this goal!

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- My goal
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- Hi everyone!
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- I set a goal - I should know English very well!
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- For me this goal is not so easy.
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- I should have a lot of patience and giblet.
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- So today I watched "House M.D." 's series with English captions.
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- If I heard unknown words, I made a notes for studying.
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- This way for studying language is very interesting, I should say.
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- Also I listen to music in English and try to translate the songs.
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- I hope that I will get this goal!
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