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Text from seesaws0 - English

  • Your English for me... in return my Japanese for you:)

  • Hi, I'm Shiori.
  • I have just registered this site to improve my English, but also I'd love to talk to people as many as possible!
  • Feel free to talk to me~ Hmm...
  • What do you want to know about me?
  • ...OK, I will follow the suggestion, Polyglot!
  • *Travel Experience* is today's my topic.
  • I really love to travel around the world!
  • I've traveled England, French, Italy, Korea, Thailand, Indonesia, Australia... and here, US!
  • I spent this Christmas and New year holidays at east coast.
  • I visited NYC and Boston, NYC for Christmas and Boston for New year.
  • Actually I wanted to spend my first day at Times Square, but I gave up because I heard that the diaper is needed OMG!!!
  • I'm still wondering if it's true or not...
  • NY was amazing in terms of arts!
  • There are a bunch of great museums and venues.
  • I went to see 2 musicals, Chicago and Mamma Mia.
  • Although I understand very limited English, their songs and dances were so impressive that I can't describe how I was moved!
  • The place I love in NY is Brooklyn.
  • I saw really cool graphic arts everywhere, especially at Green Point.
  • The cafe I dropped by was also nice and cozy place.
  • I have checked on Yelp :) I don't like Manhattan much because of their crowded roads and the glaring signs...
  • I will write about Boston next time!

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English