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Text from vaness182 - English

  • December 27th.

  • Today is Friday, December 27th.
  • Today my brother bet me to pick up me, but after it, he double the bet and he lost, now he owe me money and pick up me.
  • Yesterday I can't remember that was happened, I was in house, after I saw myself in the hospital, I don't remeber anything, only I have a terrible ache on my muscles and my family worried for me.
  • In the night, ma copine, came home and she was seeing me and asked me all, how are you? and I said to her that I feel good, only was a fainting, the doctors gave me medecines and the best medicine is ma copine.
  • My brother got up me, pick up me to the bed, and call the ambulance, everybody was trying talk me and try to woke up me, but I coundn't.
  • Today everybody said to me: when you are sleep (fainting) you are so quiet, after you talk in others languages, but I don't remember :C.
  • When I came back home, I saw from the garden through the window my friends and ma copine, my neighbors and my family blew the globes and see happy faces.
  • I still without force, in the morning I've broken a cristal glas, but my mommy understood myself and she don't get angry.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Title
  • Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • Yesterday I can't remember that was happened, I was in house, after I saw myself in the hospital, I don't remeber anything, only I have a terrible ache on my muscles and my family worried for me.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
    • In the night, ma copine, came home and she was seeing me and asked me all, how are you? and I said to her that I feel good, only was a fainting, the doctors gave me medecines and the best medicine is ma copine.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • My brother got up me, pick up me to the bed, and call the ambulance, everybody was trying talk me and try to woke up me, but I coundn't.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • Today everybody said to me: when you are sleep (fainting) you are so quiet, after you talk in others languages, but I don't remember :C.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • When I came back home, I saw from the garden through the window my friends and ma copine, my neighbors and my family blew the globes and see happy faces.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8