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Education

*   The degree of Bachelor at Đại Nam University. Degree classification: Good (Summary: 7.79),

*   Other certificates:

 

Date

Name

 

Level

03/2012

Toeic

IIG

Score: 635

10/2011

Informatics certification

School of foreign economic technology technics education joint stock company

 B

12/2009

Effective communication skills

Tam Viet group

 

1/2010

Effective presentation skills

Tam Viet group

 

 

 

Work experience


From: November - 2010                                         

To: April - 2011

Company: Smart Garden (TGM coporation)

Position: Mentor

 

Main tasks:

A part time job, my main work was organizing many playing and learning programs the children and their parents. I guided the children in teamwork, inspired children. Through the programs and event, we help the children to draw meaningful lessons and help them to improve the living skills.

I also attended in sale activities and give advices for the parents of the children about toy products and learning programs in my company.

Achievement:

Involved in the development of programs such as “Gia dinh du xuan”, held a press conference to launch the library, organizing some event such as: the woman day 03/08, Noel ...  and hundreds of learning programs for children. We created the good lessons and significant value for many pupils in Doan Thi Diem Primary School, Star Primary school and many other primary schools around Hanoi.

Reason for resign:

Take time to focus on learning.

 

 

 

 

 

From: September - 2012                                         

To: November - 2012

Company: Nhan Doi Financial Investment Joint Stock Company

Position:       

Business Staff

Main tasks:

Give advices on Forex currency market for customers. Looked for customers, investors and gave the advices, took care investors who buy, sell foreign currency, goods in the Forex currency exchange market. Researched technical, information in the world to offer the strategies, plans to help investors trade effectively, profitability.

Reason for resign:

I want to find a job which is more challenging, more interesting and more opportunities.
       

 

 

Skills

· Learned the professional accounting and the basic work such as tax reporting, financial statements, etc… while I was studying in Trang Khoa Trading & Manufacturing Co., Ltd.

· Learned teamwork skills, sales skills, increase communication skills when I participate in a part-time job at Smart Garden - a company work in education, training. Learned persuading, negotiating skills, inspiration skills when I participated in teamwork and guided the students work in groups.

· Had ability to convince others because I was a member of Ha Noi Association of Youth blood donor recruiter, participated in propaganda, persude every people to donate blood, join in many large blood donation event as: "Nghia tinh mua thu", "Xuan Hong" (thousands of people participated in blood donation), donation campaign at the University of Architecture (more than 300 participants was donated blood), Dai Nam University ...

·  Almost 2 years, I involved in volunteer activities and clubs such as Young Business club at school: attend in many conferences such as "building self-image" of Tâm Việt group, "lighting business dream" of speaker Nguyen Duy Cuong ... Thereby, my communication skill is improve quickly.

·  Teamwork skill is well because I participated in extracurricular activities: join the volunteer student group at school or join in a project named "Thiep Nhan Ai" of a volunteer group which we made many cards to help the children at Friendship Village,.

 

 

Interests

Reading books

Learning English, going out and communication with everybody.

Listening to music, traveling.

Playing Badminton.

 

 

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