GIVE ANSWERS - English

Hi, my name is Oksana. I live in Moscow (Russia). Right now I'm improving my English skills. And also I'm working on my pronunciation. I'd like to ask you for your assistance. Could you check whether I pronounce all the sounds correctly and give me written(!) recommendations on how well you can understand my speech and how to improve my pronunciation? If you agree, there are links to recording and text what I read under this message.

Please, write down all my strong and weak points. I will be very grateful for this.
 

recording - https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B06c-7PRA9mNemM4QmV5ZS1vVVE

text (1st paragraph)  - https://deepenglish.com/2016/09/scientists-gave-lives-protecting-seeds/