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Richard's sent me some birthday money for I buy a new DVD
Hi Richard. How are you?
Thank you for the present.
How you already know, I'm going to buy my favourite DVD called ''A monster came to see me'' because this film represent the most important things as mum's died. See you soon.

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- Richard's sent me some birthday money for I buy a new DVD
  투표하세요!
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문장 1
- Hi Richard. How are you?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- Thank you for the present.
  투표하세요!
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문장 3
- How you already know, I'm going to buy my favourite DVD called ''A monster came to see me'' because this film represent the most important things as mum's died. See you soon.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3