添削

man ba grammare farsi kheyli mushkil daram. mitunid un jomlehara eslah konid? kodumesh doruste? baraye sizdah sal dashtam futbal bazi mikardam, vali tasadof dashtam, bekhatere in dige nemitunam ba ye team bazi konam. man baraye sizdah sal futbal bazi mikardam, vali bekhatere inke tasadof dashtam dige nemitunam dar ye team bazi konam. baraye sizdah sal futbal bazi mikardam, vali tasadof dashtam, be na bar in dige nemitunam dar ye team bazi konam. merci!