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Agar...
Farsi kheyli khosam miyad, vali ye mushkil daaram: Hichvaght motma'en nistam chejuri baayad "agar" estefaade konam... khob, sai mikonam: 1.
Age ye ruz iraan beram, hichvaght in keshwaraa faraahmush nemikonam. 2.
Age emruz vaght daashte baasham, be shomaa zang mizanam. 3.
Age aasun bud, baraaye maghz tamrin nabud (???). 4.
Age be man zang zadi, be khaaneyet miaamadam (???). 5.
Age ino baraat kharidam, hich pul dige nadaashtam (???) Chejuri doroost mishe?
Tashakore ziyad baraaye eslaah kardane shomaa!

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- Farsi kheyli khosam miyad, vali ye mushkil daaram: Hichvaght motma'en nistam chejuri baayad "agar" estefaade konam... khob, sai mikonam: 1.
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- Age ye ruz iraan beram, hichvaght in keshwaraa faraahmush nemikonam. 2.
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- Age emruz vaght daashte baasham, be shomaa zang mizanam. 3.
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- Age aasun bud, baraaye maghz tamrin nabud (???). 4.
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- Age be man zang zadi, be khaaneyet miaamadam (???). 5.
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- Age ino baraat kharidam, hich pul dige nadaashtam (???) Chejuri doroost mishe?
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- Tashakore ziyad baraaye eslaah kardane shomaa!
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