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Hajime
*because I lack time, i won't write in Hiragana* Hajimemashite, watashi Leon desu.
Ore wa doitsugo soshite juroku toshi desu.
(I am german and 16 years old) Nihon no gengo, suki.
(I like the japanese language) Shitagatte watashi wa ureshi (that this Website exists).
(And I am glad that this Website exists) I'd be very content if you could help me with my grammar and my vocabulation

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문장 1
- *because I lack time, i won't write in Hiragana* Hajimemashite, watashi Leon desu.
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문장 2
- Ore wa doitsugo soshite juroku toshi desu.
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문장 3
- (I am german and 16 years old) Nihon no gengo, suki.
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문장 4
- (I like the japanese language) Shitagatte watashi wa ureshi (that this Website exists).
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문장 5
- (And I am glad that this Website exists) I'd be very content if you could help me with my grammar and my vocabulation
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5