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self introduction
안녕하세요 저는 이마니 개벌 입니다.
처음 뵙겠습니다.열여덟살 입니다. 미국서 왔습니다. 학생입니다.
나는 한국어를 배우고 있어, 그런데 아직 조금 밖에 몰라.

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PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - 한국어

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- 안녕하세요 저는 이마니 개벌 입니다.
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- 처음 뵙겠습니다.열여덟살 입니다. 미국서 왔습니다. 학생입니다.
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- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 2
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- 나는 한국어를 배우고 있어, 그런데 아직 조금 밖에 몰라.
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- เพิ่มการแก้ไขใหม่ - Sentence 3