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也许，他真的累了，一旦有机会休息，就想好好享受一下。我翻译成英文：Maybe he is really tired,once he gets a chance,he wants to rest. 我翻译的对吗？

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- 也许，他真的累了，一旦有机会休息，就想好好享受一下。我翻译成英文：Maybe he is really tired,once he gets a chance,he wants to rest. 我翻译的对吗？
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