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在一个美丽的春天的夜晚当时我睡得正香, 我不让意识天亮了. 勉强清醒，处处我听了鸟的噪.
昨天晚上，我听了刮大风了吹下雨了.
今天上午，我发现了许多鲜花散落在地面上

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- 在一个美丽的春天的夜晚当时我睡得正香, 我不让意识天亮了. 勉强清醒，处处我听了鸟的噪.
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- 昨天晚上，我听了刮大风了吹下雨了.
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- 今天上午，我发现了许多鲜花散落在地面上
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