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  • THE MACHINE AGE

  • I´m going to talk about the machine age.
  • Nowadays, there are a lot of things which you can enjoy doing, such as playing computer games, connecting to Internet with your laptop, taking photos with your digital camera, watching films with your DVD player, listening to music with your MP3 player… The selection depends on whatever you need.
  • A GPS is really useful when you are travelling.
  • Also, the mobile phone is good to comunícate with people wherever you are.
  • But, I´m interested in learning English so I enjoy listening to podcast with my laptop.
  • There are a lot of ways which you can use to comunícate with someone, such as, calling by phone, sending SMS, Internet, writing letters… So most people are interested in Internet.
  • They enjoy using social media like Facebook or twitter where upload information, photos and sharing videos.
  • Also they use e-mails to give or to receive information about companies or sending files and documents.
  • That´s why I´d recommend the laptop as a useful machine because for me, it´s one of the most complete skill I can imagine.
  • However, I enjoy watching movies and listening to music because I find it really satisfying and relaxing.
  • I don´t need more machines because current mobile phones can do everything.

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    • Nowadays, there are a lot of things which you can enjoy doing, such as playing computer games, connecting to Internet with your laptop, taking photos with your digital camera, watching films with your DVD player, listening to music with your MP3 player… The selection depends on whatever you need.
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    • There are a lot of ways which you can use to comunícate with someone, such as, calling by phone, sending SMS, Internet, writing letters… So most people are interested in Internet.
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    • That´s why I´d recommend the laptop as a useful machine because for me, it´s one of the most complete skill I can imagine.
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