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Hi there. I am new here.
Everytime I want to update my profile and write more informations about me, I submit the changes but when I enter my profile I find nothing updated.
Can anyone help me?
Thanks in advance. :)

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- Hi there. I am new here.
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句子 1
- Everytime I want to update my profile and write more informations about me, I submit the changes but when I enter my profile I find nothing updated.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Can anyone help me?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Thanks in advance. :)
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3