Arabic script style

Hi everyone. (Salaam!)



I intend to start learning Arabic soon, but for the moment I'm still learning the script. So I've just done this art, which is supposed to be my name, and I'd like to know if my personal writing style is readable, or if perhaps it looks too weird. Anyone could help me with this?

Here's the picture: https://polyglotclub.com/myprofile.php?id_profil=mbonci& img=1& img_id=3596 (it's in my profile)

This is the intended text: م َ ا ر ْ ك ُ س (maarkus)



Thanks for any help!