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  • essay: Maternal instincts or becoming a parent

  • Essay topic: "Maternal instinct/Becoming a parent" Personally, I feel like I would never be ready for becoming a mother.
  • At least not for another couple of years.
  • I strongly believe that a future mother must be all set for such a radical change in her life, she mst be ready not only physically but mentally as well.
  • It's important to be prepared for the baby's arrival.
  • This includes a financial stability of both parants.
  • But my observation indicates that lots of people, no matter what their situation is, are always seems to have an obstacle or unfavorable circumstances preventing them from such a step as bringing a new life into this world.
  • I've heard that most people are not ready mentally when they recieve the news informing them that they are about to become mommy and daddy.
  • I don't think that nine months are too short of a time to become ready for the parenthood.
  • Parants should start to prepare themselves way in advance for the future expention of their family.
  • Those who smoke and consume alcool should consider quiting such habits.
  • Better eating paterns would be a big plus and, of course, adapting regular working out routine into your weekly schedule during the last two or three years prior to impragnation would make a major difference during the labor.
  • I've met some women whose maternal instincts were so strong that they practicly begged their partner to have a baby together.
  • I might say that whose girls have their biological clock ticking loud and clear.
  • I am wondering though if there is another category of women whose maternal instinct is not so pronounced and who regret making that life-changing decision?
  • As it might seem a little overwhelming and long lasting as a task to be responsible for another human beeing's life for two or more decades.
  • I assume that having a baby is a heavy responsibility.
  • Or maybe it all comes down to having the right life partner and splitting the heavy load in two to make it easy and enjoyable enough to not be too owhevelmed?

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  • Zdanie 1
    • Essay topic: "Maternal instinct/Becoming a parent" Personally, I feel like I would never be ready for becoming a mother.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
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  • Zdanie 3
    • I strongly believe that a future mother must be all set for such a radical change in her life, she mst be ready not only physically but mentally as well.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
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  • Zdanie 6
    • But my observation indicates that lots of people, no matter what their situation is, are always seems to have an obstacle or unfavorable circumstances preventing them from such a step as bringing a new life into this world.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • I've heard that most people are not ready mentally when they recieve the news informing them that they are about to become mommy and daddy.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
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  • Zdanie 11
    • Better eating paterns would be a big plus and, of course, adapting regular working out routine into your weekly schedule during the last two or three years prior to impragnation would make a major difference during the labor.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 11
  • Zdanie 12
    • I've met some women whose maternal instincts were so strong that they practicly begged their partner to have a baby together.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 12
  • Zdanie 13
  • Zdanie 14
    • I am wondering though if there is another category of women whose maternal instinct is not so pronounced and who regret making that life-changing decision?
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 14
  • Zdanie 15
    • As it might seem a little overwhelming and long lasting as a task to be responsible for another human beeing's life for two or more decades.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 15DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 15
  • Zdanie 16
  • Zdanie 17
    • Or maybe it all comes down to having the right life partner and splitting the heavy load in two to make it easy and enjoyable enough to not be too owhevelmed?
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 17