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Text from Sgorky - English

Hello
Hello to everyone!
This is my first post in the polyglot community.
I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!

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- Hello
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- Hello to everyone!
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- This is my first post in the polyglot community.
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- I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
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- I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!
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