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Teks daripada Sgorky - English

Hello
Hello to everyone!
This is my first post in the polyglot community.
I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!

Title
- Hello
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hello to everyone!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- This is my first post in the polyglot community.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4