Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Ne korektita

Text from Nourhan - English

  • Addicted to something

  • It's not okay when you're addicted to something even if that thing is good and useful.
  • I used to be addicted to Twitter, I spent the last 2 years tweeting about every single thing happens in my life, I stopped reading, Stopped chatting with my friends"the real ones", I even stopped gathering with my family!
  • I had spent my life as a famous tweep in unreal world who has nothing to do but tweeting for getting more RTs ,more followers and more stars.
  • I can't deny that Twitter helped me a lot in discovering my self, knowing what I really like and what I really need but it also harmed me, but you can put the blame on me as I am the one who gave it all my time and I am the one who turned to be addicted to it.
  • That's why I am asking you all not to be addicted to anything, try your best to keep balance and don't give anything more than it deserves.
  • Have a nice day :))

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • I used to be addicted to Twitter, I spent the last 2 years tweeting about every single thing happens in my life, I stopped reading, Stopped chatting with my friends"the real ones", I even stopped gathering with my family!
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • I had spent my life as a famous tweep in unreal world who has nothing to do but tweeting for getting more RTs ,more followers and more stars.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • I can't deny that Twitter helped me a lot in discovering my self, knowing what I really like and what I really need but it also harmed me, but you can put the blame on me as I am the one who gave it all my time and I am the one who turned to be addicted to it.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • That's why I am asking you all not to be addicted to anything, try your best to keep balance and don't give anything more than it deserves.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6