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  • Addicted to something

  • It's not okay when you're addicted to something even if that thing is good and useful.
  • I used to be addicted to Twitter, I spent the last 2 years tweeting about every single thing happens in my life, I stopped reading, Stopped chatting with my friends"the real ones", I even stopped gathering with my family!
  • I had spent my life as a famous tweep in unreal world who has nothing to do but tweeting for getting more RTs ,more followers and more stars.
  • I can't deny that Twitter helped me a lot in discovering my self, knowing what I really like and what I really need but it also harmed me, but you can put the blame on me as I am the one who gave it all my time and I am the one who turned to be addicted to it.
  • That's why I am asking you all not to be addicted to anything, try your best to keep balance and don't give anything more than it deserves.
  • Have a nice day :))

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    • I used to be addicted to Twitter, I spent the last 2 years tweeting about every single thing happens in my life, I stopped reading, Stopped chatting with my friends"the real ones", I even stopped gathering with my family!
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • I had spent my life as a famous tweep in unreal world who has nothing to do but tweeting for getting more RTs ,more followers and more stars.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • I can't deny that Twitter helped me a lot in discovering my self, knowing what I really like and what I really need but it also harmed me, but you can put the blame on me as I am the one who gave it all my time and I am the one who turned to be addicted to it.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • That's why I am asking you all not to be addicted to anything, try your best to keep balance and don't give anything more than it deserves.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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