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Text from Mialee - English

  • Postgraduate Interview

  • Please talk something about your internship in kindergarten.
  • I think this internship is the most valuable experience for me to be a preschool teacher.
  • The kind principle of the kindergarten said that a child’s habits established in this age would be with them throughout their life.
  • She has devote all herself to education and she was so appreciated my courage to have a try from practical teaching, so she provide me with that opportunity.
  • I cherished and enjoyed the time spent with children, because they are, as far as i am consider, the most purest thing in the world.
  • I know that they are in the formative year and i want to be a responsible teacher, so i participated in teacher qualification training, absorb knowledge from extracurricular reading and tried to apply theory into practice.
  • For example, I appreciated the theory ‘Learning by Playing’ researched and implemented by John Dewey.
  • I made a big box containing a paper-made tiger, rabbit and other animals with their mouths open.
  • Meanwhile, I prepared some notes with names and drawings of different foods so that the children could feed the paper-made animals.
  • This game provides a practical way for children to acquire basic knowledge, and they may be inspired to get more information about animals and their foods after the game.
  • Helping those children make progress bit by bit gave me great happiness, whatever the weather was, they were my sunshine.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • The kind principle of the kindergarten said that a child’s habits established in this age would be with them throughout their life.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
    • She has devote all herself to education and she was so appreciated my courage to have a try from practical teaching, so she provide me with that opportunity.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • I cherished and enjoyed the time spent with children, because they are, as far as i am consider, the most purest thing in the world.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • I know that they are in the formative year and i want to be a responsible teacher, so i participated in teacher qualification training, absorb knowledge from extracurricular reading and tried to apply theory into practice.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
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    • Meanwhile, I prepared some notes with names and drawings of different foods so that the children could feed the paper-made animals.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
    • This game provides a practical way for children to acquire basic knowledge, and they may be inspired to get more information about animals and their foods after the game.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10
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