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I wante learn English
hello , My name is Lucas I'm Brazilian ,I have 21 years old .
my dream is learns the language English , because I really like to watch movies in English, would be grateful to receive correction to help me learn.

Judul
- I wante learn English
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- hello , My name is Lucas I'm Brazilian ,I have 21 years old .
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- my dream is learns the language English , because I really like to watch movies in English, would be grateful to receive correction to help me learn.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2