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I wante learn English
hello , My name is Lucas I'm Brazilian ,I have 21 years old .
my dream is learns the language English , because I really like to watch movies in English, would be grateful to receive correction to help me learn.

LUCASWESLEYJanuary 201350% GOOD (2 votes)
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- I wante learn English
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문장 1
- hello , My name is Lucas I'm Brazilian ,I have 21 years old .
  투표하세요!
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- my dream is learns the language English , because I really like to watch movies in English, would be grateful to receive correction to help me learn.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2